Star done.2017

You need to write four paragraphs about your trip to the Stardome. They need to have a
topic sentence,
three details,

and a concluding sentence.

Remember! This is a recount - you need to describe what happened on your trip in order.

What did you do, see, and learn during each part of your trip?

To help you, there are some topic sentences to start off each paragraph.

Start writing here:

Yesterday, all the Year 3s and Year 4s got on a bus to go to the Stardome.Yesterday we went to star done and everyone was very excited to go on a bus to star done.Then we got on to the bus we sing a song called  little einsteins.

At the Stardome, we learned some really cool things about our solar system.  If you look up into the sky  one them are not a star because one of them is a plants it is  called Mercury .do you know that Mercury was the closest planet to the sun and it is so hot there and do you know that saturn his ring is not a big ring it is some smooth rocks. Then we went to this movie we had to look up into the sky plants.

When we weren’t in the Stardome, we were having fun outside.Then we were not in the  star done we played on a playground it had a flying fox and there's his wheel thing and the wheel go’s  round and round a Pol.We had fun going into this train track and it had lots of thing inside. me and my friend were play with Sivaenah little baby brother Tiger he was so cut.

After all this, we headed back to Point England School.Then we went back to school everyone was tired on the bus.Then we got to school but everyone was very sad because the teachers nevered  let the kids sleep in class.