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Thursday, 16 April 2020

Its not what you say...

WALT: craft clear sentences

 Task description: This week for writing we are writing like we are having a conversation with someone.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Nina,

    Your conversation with your mum was hilarious! We are going to be comparing the difference between having a conversation with someone and crafting a text with a reader. For example:
    Bob: I love this, where did you get it from?
    Bobarina: oh that old thing? I've had it lying around for ages
    Bob: ugh... I think I hear thunder
    Bobarina: oh no... okay... no my washing

    This makes some sense to us, but we are having to work hard to figure out what is happening, which means we may stop reading. Instead we could use full sentences and add enough detail for our readers to follow our story:

    "I love this, where did you get it from?" asked Bob as he held up an antique vase....

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  2. Hi Nina
    You are REALLY!!! smart.... keep it up. also Stay Safe!!!

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