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Monday 28 May 2018

2018 Choose It Narrative.

Today we went to school. It was a sunny day there was lots of clouds in the sky. We wished that we could go on a air balloon that were carried by balloons so we had to go to class but we could not stop thinking about it.
It is time to go home they went to sleep all they see is a air ballon they went inside Nina went with her friends Mele, bella, Norah-jade, Mia they were so happy to go on a air balloon but they did not know how to turn it on so they could fly but someone just came from they dream his name is Simon he was 21 of age he was not tall not


skinny not fat he is just right for the job. He knows how to work a air balloon so he helped them to fly off in the sky so they fly up until they wanted to get off. But the man was not there with them so they were very scared because they did not know how to land it. So they were cutting the top of the air bollan to news it as a parachute so they jump off and they news the parachute early so it took them so long for them to land on the ground and they started to go and eat because they were hungry.

1 comment:

  1. good story Nina it just needs full stops and no just then and the and and because you cane use cool wrods

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