Peephole.

In the beginning there were 8 lovely beautiful girls ‘’well some of them’’ ‘’Some of them were strong and Popular. They were called the BESTIES!.They first went to get some ice cream to celebrate a Birthday for one of the besties her name was Maddison rose she is so strong she can knock 10 Boys with her Peer hands’’So watch out boys’’.She is from Tonga and Fiji.

Then we started to talk her mum said do you girls want to camping we said ‘’Yes please ‘’ So then we started to pack we pack a lots ‘’wwww’’ .


Then it was the next day.When we started to camp we had a cool campen and there campen was in samoan too and they had a door it had a peephole so every time they always will looked through the peephole everytime they called see Beautiful Bird and butterflies .

TO BE CONTINUED

So today we had to do Peer Editing Rubric and I was with Osa and he was Comment on my writing good staff and his writing was good too.